Friday, May 7, 2010

My First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

This may not be the best I've written,
But in a good way I'm smitten,
You gave me my first kiss,
And everything felt perfect
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Nicholas Hrynchuk
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Ella Leiva 07 May 2010

Is she the one you had written so much? ? :)

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Andrea Segundo 07 May 2010

Nice seemed it went a perfect day, if not better. love how some rhymes and can see the imagery. Love the poem

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