Wednesday, August 2, 2006

My First Kiss Comments

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The night was chilly, smooth and dark
cold breeze was blowing around
i was waiting by my glass window..
and my heart cudnt help but pound
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vidhi ghodgaonkar
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, vidhi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Catastrophe King 02 August 2006

This is a good narrative poem... well written. Infact, this is impressive..... will look forward to more from you........

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