Tuesday, November 26, 2019

My First Kiss Comments

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My first kiss was like a rod pushed inside my mouth
I was filled with revulsion
All that saliva pouring into my mouth
He told me
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Laya Bajpai
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 December 2019

My first kiss was like a rod pushed inside my mouth I was filled with revulsion All that saliva pouring into my mouth He told me Move your tongue at least I struggled.. such a true and wonderful experience described very sincerely. love, respect nobility and fineness shoild be there. or else why we should continue in relationship..

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Laya Bajpai 06 December 2019

Thanks for reading and liking the poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 November 2019

To hate him or pity him I wondered whether kissing was a skill or an expression of love.// the kiss the part of love but the kiss with saliva the sign of hate!

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Gajanan Mishra 26 November 2019

kissing a skill, right- love and life

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