Sunday, January 27, 2019

My First Kiss Comments

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I was all of 9 years old
With the innocence of a rose
Mother had styled my long blonde hair
I felt pretty, I suppose
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Thomas Plotz 06 May 2019

So, an older boy then? ?

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(BLUSH) Actually, Thomas, I think we were both the same age. He was maybe 10, at the most. : -)

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

I'm glad our parents never knew About our secret kiss The memory of it makes me smile, As now, I reminisce.....very beautiful...poem and your way of presentation..thanks

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Practicing Poetess 05 February 2019

Thanks to you, also, Prabir!

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Ray Hansell 28 January 2019

A wonderful poem about memories from your childhood. Well written.

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Practicing Poetess 28 January 2019

Thank you, Ray. Not always easy to put real-life memories into a rhyming poem, but the challenge is both rewarding and worth it!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 January 2019

Such a lovely memory of a very first kiss....10+++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 27 January 2019

Many thanks, Bernard!

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