Saturday, September 3, 2011

My First Footprints Comments

Rating: 4.8

I remember the day, when I strolled with you!
You cared for me at my very steps-
Holding my arm in yours;
I kept moving by your side- all along the way.
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Nanthinii Mohan
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2019

You wept for me, when my legs pained More than I and none as you; still in love awaiting your return... expectations so well portrayed. thank u. tony

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Neela Nath Das 05 April 2012

It made me remember the fond memories of my dead father.Good Write!

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Valerie Dohren 11 March 2012

This is a really beautiful poem, loved the read.

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Allemagne Roßmann 04 September 2011

great thinking...well done

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 September 2011

your love poems are really beautiful.keep inking.liked it.

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