Saturday, September 30, 2017

My First Day In School Comments

Rating: 5.0

As five years age did I complete,
To a school, my father made me admit,
But hard task was it all,
Recognizing alpha-numeric symbol.
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Kishor Kumar Mishra
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Paresh Chakra 15 October 2017

To play truant was my intention, Out of the class, towards home I ran. Lovely and funny. Thanks poet for the sharing. 10 for it.

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Kishor Kumar Mishra 15 October 2017

Thanks Mr. Paresh Chakra for your comment.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 October 2017

A real life experience, so well expressed. Thanks Kishore for the sharing. 10++++

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Kishor Kumar Mishra 15 October 2017

Thanks Mr. Chakra for your comment and rating.

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Kim Barney 01 October 2017

The first day of school can be a frightening experience, especially for a child with ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder) . Here is an excerpt from the book Birdseed Cookies by Janis Jaquith, who says she suffers from the disorder, or at least did when she was a child. This just breaks my heart. I tried to read it aloud to my wife and couldn't do it without breaking down. I'm sitting at a desk in first grade. The teacher's standing up in front of us, and she's talking about something or other … I look down at my desk. There are all these little squares of green paper. I don't know where they came from. Each square has a number on it. What am I supposed to do with those? I look around at the other kids and a hot stab of panic shoots through my chest. All the other kids are doing something special with those numbers. They all know what to do. Now the teacher is moving up and down the aisles, licking little gold stars and pressing them to the foreheads of the kids who know what they're doing. She goes right past me. I don't belong here. I don't know how I got here. I don't know what I'm supposed to do. I'd go home... but I don't know how to do that either.

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Kishor Kumar Mishra 15 October 2017

Thanks Kim for your comment. Thanks for your narration from the book Birdseed Cookies.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 October 2017

Such a very good poem, Kishor... a full 10++++

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Kishor Kumar Mishra 15 October 2017

Thanks Mr. Bernard for your comment and rating.

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