Oh, it came so fast like a speedy train,
in the month of heavy rain,
when the birds of joy just flew away,
and my heartbeat rose up each day.
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wow! ! you are so young and talendted keep the good work! ! i loved the flow of the poem good job!
The narration is very lively and we can identify with it, on the first day some children are too enthusiastic and some too reluctant to step in… At this age you have penned in good stanzaic form each followed in sequence right from your heart… May you make lots of good friends and be always successful in your academics. Abha