In the sea of faces I saw a face
All in a haze, so filmy
Nothing did I see clearly
But a pair of love lit eyes
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In reading this poem I am suddenly overwhelmed with memories of my first crush, and my feelings of love sickness that plagued me when I was near her, that sense of aching I could never describe. I think you have perfectly articulated those feelings down for me in more tender words Valsa. A ballad for all first crushes! . You could have been my Sara!
My heart began to race My breath got hitched My lips went dry and parched I didn’t hear what he asked......amazing depiction relating to crush. A gorgeous poem with touching expression is aptly presented here. Thanks for sharing.10
WOW! Wow! ! wow! ! ! were we ten years old? ? if only i'd known how i would affect you, i would have turned and walked away without a word! that is how much i LOVED you when we were 10! ! ! i would have sacrificed my own passion to bring you comfort. thinking about you.........still. day and night. ESPECIALLY at night! ! ! Anonymous :)
Congenita l paralysis-beautiful line in a beautiful poem. Well done my friend! 10/10
the poem is powerful and charming... the strong yet tender feelings; kind of grow on one... going on and on with no end in sight...almost welcome....just like the real thing a superb effect has been created by stressing on the feelings written from..that unique perspective... ;) lovely liked
Beautiful poem Valsa..Many captivating lines. My heart skipped a beat Felt butterflies in my stomach A tremor took over my hands and legs Beads of sweat appeared on my brow....Fantastic lines which add beauty to the First Crush. You have captured words very well in this poem. Enjoyed reading it.
It's a wonderful poem Valsa. What I Will say... You have awaken me Just now at this moment I am feeling to say I L O V E Y O U ...... Ha Ha Ha....... Just amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10 in 10
i find innocence ruling in this poem, i can only say we are blessed to read a gifted hand on pH!
Hello poet Valsa. Thank you for your recent review. I enjoyed your poem and have been in those shoes before, you described it precisely! Loyd
Beautiful, teenage innocence confessed. Poignant yet it gave me a chuckle of the little girl's first encounter! Great write!
There you are madam.. Fine rendering, innocent and candid speaking of thoughts. But not awaiting to read the tale of the next crush if any..
Things at first sight brought to a jolt that ended in a safe landing of love.............Valsa........what a wonderful poetic reminiscence and write as well...................
First crush leading to a safe landing beautifully described. The tempo continued to the last line. Thank you for sharing.
The poet made a nice and lovely poem in its very essence and meaning. Nice and good.
when ever read a poem.......it swallow our emotions to, really feel here Felt butterflies in my stomach A tremor took over my hands and legs Beads of sweat appeared on my brow
a good feel of first crush....this may be the feel of first crush for most of them...like it...
This poem resonates with me. The wonders of intense infatuation.. that holds us spellbound A marvelous poem that expresses in beautiful detail the feelings or secret burning desire to be with someone who you find very attractive and so special. It brings back memories of that wonderful feeling that will always be remembered and treasured. A beautiful poem. So well expressed. Loved reading it.Five Stars! ! !