Monday, October 17, 2011

My First Crush Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fair skin, lean look, and a casual gait,
My first crush walked in through the college gate.

Love knew no boundaries, I knew this for sure,
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Siya Pande
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 30 April 2012

'CRUSH-PHENOMENON'...be bold '...Should I go back in the past and hold his hand! ...' adore first fruit..why shy...nice emotive stuff...tenner....Regards ~ niv PS Please comment on my poem 'I Want To Be Raped' [14 words poetry]...PH banned it ultimately gave in. n ..

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Dave Walker 22 October 2011

Really like this. Shows how love can Find you. great write.

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