** (My First Attempt At Satire) Comments

this is a very very powerful satire.if this is the effect it creates on being 'first attempt' what deadly satires will follow.we are waiting. 'head filled with smoke' liked this expression, thanx

true picture, the last three lines were amasing, i tried one on the same' made gods'....thanks for sharing

A very well thought and versed poem. You have talent and promise

This one's quiet a reserched write....... interesting to read! Thank you!

Yea.. it's unfortunate that some those very accomplished Gurus also do bad deeds on the sly, like Sai Baba fondling kids. The Goodness Gracious Me satires have an element of truth and are very funny. Osho was a truely helpful Guru but he was misunderstood -they saw his 100 Mercedes and couldn't cope with the paradoxical juxtaposition of his vast and contradictory nature, but he's done alot for India and the west, alot I'd say. I think theres a great many good gurus out there, just they've been bad pressed and are hard to find, its difficult to see whose genuine whose fake. Theres some great female teachers though like Amma, Mother Meera.

Asma, I have to agree with Doc.......................Hugs, Diane