My Firework Comments

This poem took me by surprise, Each time I read it it lights my fuse, But I don't want a bang, or a bright light, or wonder, I want to be kept in that half minute, of expectation, suspended in a breath, I want a slow burn.

sad feeling best created the poem.

I felt the feeling of the poem in its meaning and the excruciating pain understands. The creative writing of poem in such senses is actually difficult but it had done well by the poet and a nice one I think.

I love the emotive language with which you write, because if you are able to make the reader feel and relate to what you have written then you have done your job, and as far as I am concerned you have certainly done your job. I love how you break your ideas up into different stanzas, this makes it easier for the reader to come to terms with the content in the poem as well as what they feel about the narrative offered. I especially love how you knot the poem together with the question right at the centre of the poem, it gives the poem a structured appeal. I think the repetition is a bit overused, but it is definitely effective and suggests that words hold more power than what we give them credit for. This poem is quite abstract and wont be a favourite among many because of its in your face factor, but that is precisely what emotions are and what lies make you feel like. An all round great poem :)

beautiful, I like it, thanks.