Friday, July 27, 2007

My Fire Comments

Rating: 4.8

I have been lonely before.
Listing between friends.
Going through the motions again and again.
Adding the moments together,
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Cordell Rich
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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Ah this one is really lovely. Sadness and lonelyness well portrayed.

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Colin J... 01 September 2007

' I have been lonely before. Listing between friends. Yes, we've all been there... Nice poem, Colin J...

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Martin Swords 29 July 2007

Cordell This I like a lot. It's alive with feeling. ..salty tears.....very good also it's tight and yet says its message quickly amd movingly thank you Martin

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Cordell Rich

Cordell Rich

Afton, Wyoming
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