My Final Mistake Comments

Well done, i.like how you write

Final mistake is right, please don't do it, your poem is like reading a final good-bye, very painful, and I sincerely hope you just want to let out your feelings in this poem, not actually do it. Don't let the lie that death is the end consume you. There is much more going on in life then what the eye can see, trust me I've had a glimpse. You really don't want to go to the places I've seen. I have almost died on a couple of occasions, and I have witnessed horrific things that no one else around me could see. Not my imagination, true horror. I'm not just trying to scare you. I am warning you because I really don't want anyone to go to the places I've seen. Pain unimaginable on the other side. Sincerely, Kara You have talent, hope you keep writing.

It's slightly clichéd, but you do have great imagery, which keeps it being good.

very very nice poem indeed

I read this through my tears, your words have power and emotion... Beautifully written.

nice poem: +) silentpoet grl: +)

How your talent always amazes me, I feel your pain and each deep cut is felt in my own flesh. Please, Keep writing, reach out and touch someone with your words that you may teach of the injustices of this world....blessings n smiles....de

I am overwhelmed by your talent.u xpress ur feelings so strongly that even a reader can feel! Please check out my poems and comment.please?

Beautiful poem, every line is perfectly written, grat job.

Wow, yet again you get the true emotion of your feelings into this poem. A very powerful Poem.

Severe depression leading to suicidal tendency..several failed attempts followed by a successful one..certain traumas have one remedy..world still needs you. come out into light before darkness engulfs all the passion to live..despite all dreads life is beautiful, hopeful..never to leave hope is strength..crimson blood is not to be shed in vain, a precious life is a hope to the universe..poem reminds me of several youth who give up their lives in a moment of weakness..need to save them at any cost!

'As crimson tears fall from my wrist' This is raw open and real yet written with eloquence. Your talent is unquestionable. Your suffering is so evident for all to see and more importantly feel. Powerful portrayal of pain...and your talent.