Wednesday, August 3, 2011

My Final Destination Comments

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When my turn would come,
Soon enough to depart from home,
Many hearts would be at still,
And my space, none to fill.
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Hudhaifah Siyad
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Hudhaifah Siyad 23 August 2011

Aqeb, promise...i wanna take my work a level higher

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Aqeb Benazir 11 August 2011

The second stanza had the most effect. good write, i can see a great deal of potential in you! let your mind enhance your pen and the urge to flow along.

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