Monday, February 13, 2012

My Final Bow Comments

Rating: 4.0

As I open my eyes for the last time I think of you and us
And what we used to be
We were once together
We went from a small fling to a big love connection
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DeAire Taylor
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Masaomi Tezuka 23 May 2012

That was a very sad poem, but it was very good and inspirational for those who are just starting as beginner poets. Great work! =)

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Ari Lucas 24 February 2012

i've....felt this way...too many times...before...i know...how this feels...how bad living seems to...be...without the one you love...i've cut before...mayn times...but i'm growing stronger....i know how to cope....by my poetry...everyone who reads my stuff cries, i've got books apon books of my poetry, the reason i am alive...to be a writer, a poet(:

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Neko Girl 24 February 2012

so much hurt and pain you have a beautiful talent and beautiful poetry keep it up :) and smile for teh days tht are worth smiling for

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Abree Wilson 16 February 2012

i really like that one its really really good

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do u lose someone recently

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