My Female Abuser Comments

i guess adeline doesn't know you the way i know you vanessa. BUT it could have been a granddaughter perhaps. i like it. i don't understand the wording of: And how she couldn't justify i 'love': Bombardments of infractions.....a great line! i suspect that the line: But I least can hold my head up high is meant to read But at least I can hold my head up high am i correct? or is it an english way of saying what i believe you mean? the way you wrote it sounds as though you are very unable to hold your head up high/be comfortable with yourself; i don't THINK that is what you mean. IS it? thanks for sharing. bri

All the way through I thought it would end up a grand-daughter or so. Sort-of let me down. Adeline

beautiful! .............luv, luv to the last syllables

A good piece of work. (I hope SHE reads it.)

Powerful poem, hard learnt lesson

A great poem that tells the tale with much emotion, that comes through to the reader very strongly. This had some nice flow and again was a pleasure to read. I too am a lover of rhymes. Kind regards

I fully understand this piece... a situation I've been in myself.

; And how she couldn't justify She never took the blame twas always someone else's fault Excuses, always lame' i like this part the most nicely done and sounds like have an intristing life

ha - u don't have a teenage daughter by any chance do u? ? ? LOL

This is an excellently well written poem - really enjoyed reading it. SG xo

Very well written and meaningful to those who have been abused. The flow was good as was the rhyming. I enjoyed the read. Lynn

It's a great well written poem, and it's great when we rise our heads up again, , keep it up vanessa, regards, Faith..

This is a real poem and excellently written. The idea flows and the phases of the 'story' is correctly sequenced, though the theme is sad it is effectively conveyed. I say you do write like an artist! 10+++++++! ! ! ! ! ! !

My female Abuser sends the right message. Nice poem.10++

And as I follow along life's path Carrying lessons I have learned I hopes she carries a few herself to stop more fingers being burned realistic and metaphor type of sweet poem with meaningful thought... its essay but I can see the depth and hidden meanings of it, some how symbolic too.. great job and well writeen poem..liekd it 10/10

Another great poem. The words are very effective.

this is a very good and angry poem Vanessa, sometimes it's good to cleanse the soul but beware of voyers

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