Saturday, November 21, 2015

My Fellow Americans Comments

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The candidates shout please observe us
They promise free programs with service
Forget about labor
It's paid by your neighbor
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Jim Franckum
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Kim Barney 27 November 2016

This is a perfectly executed limerick. It has the correct rhyme pattern and the ideal number of syllables in each line (9-9-6-6-9) . I also perfectly fits today's political situation in the U.S., even though it was written more than a year ago! Well done, Jim!

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