My Fella Comments

A very good poem, once again. Enjoyed the surprised ending. Regards!

I love this one Gypsy, there was a nice twist and on both levels it is wonderful

I LOVE YOUR POEM IT IS VERY UNIQUE AND THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS AND I AM ONLY 12 YEARS OF AGE AND AFTER MY MOTHER DIED LAST YEAR I AM INTO POEMS BECAUSE WHEN ME AND MY FAMILY WENT TO HER HOUSE I FOUND ALOT OF HER WORK BUT ANY WAYS I LOVE YOUR POEM

I like the opening line very much - that is a nice bit of internal rhyming. The rest is of course good too. Nice one.

great words, warm and funny.

I loved this poem. The ending is excellent! ! Well done!

Really enjoyed this one, thanks: -)

simple and lovely gypsy