Sunday, January 7, 2007

My Feline Love Comments

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Natures work of art in feline form
Your grace and beauty transfix
You will not be mastered or kept
Free to roam whenever you choose
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Paula Robinson
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Alicia Patti 21 January 2007

Ah, a cat lover, indeed, and a good poet, to boot. This is so well done. I especially like: 'Eaten to your hearts content Curled in embryonic state Until the next adventure beckons' I wonder if you meant to use the word 'eaten' rather than 'eating.' 'Curled in embryonic state' is marvelous imagery. best, alicia

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Zen Bojczuk 13 January 2007

Beautiful description of cats.... and of a few women I have known.

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Colin J... 13 January 2007

Hmmm, Paolo sounds very deep, you have given grace and beauty to cats however, which is what I like, Colin If you like, read my poem 'The Cat Tray' which is about my two cats...

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Patricia Gale 08 January 2007

A fine description of the feline... well done.

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