Monday, November 7, 2005

My Feelings Comments

Rating: 3.8

When you come around heaven smiles
I have this feeling for you as if you as if you are a new toy
What beats with blood also jumps for joy
When you come in my face, my eyes decline
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shamika thompson
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Matt Tia 27 February 2008

Great piece, really good feel to it as a reader, real good stuff.

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Matt Tia 27 February 2008

I'm liking the feeling you put into your work, whether this was a true story or a just a well written thought as a reader you get the sense that there's a real possible true deep love(if you you understand that) anyway great stuff

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