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Monday, October 20, 2008

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My feelings are as scattered as the leaves on the ground in fall,
As I lay in bed every night thinking of what I’ve learned,
Of the lessons that I have been taught,
Sometimes I wish that I never went for I feel I will cry as the words sink deeper,
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Brandon Wade 25 October 2008

*Sometimes I am jealous of my sister for she has a friend, A friend that understands her and loves her, for who she is, 'i dont see how this is really possible, but when i first read this line it felt like it rhymed, i know you werent trying to do that but thats almost pure engenius' and i sometimes do that at night, but friends are the last thing ive ever worried about, cause to tell you the truth any of them you make are gone in a year or two, not to be so morbid but its true or atleast i think it is...but great poem...made me smile even though its depressing...sorry...

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