My Feathered Friend Comments

A heartbreaking account of the "feathered friend", compassionate. Lovely poem. The twist in the end happy ending is adored.

A very fine piece of writing, Shihabudheen. Thanks for sharing

This is a great poem...as to why you would need my comment not quite sure you have a following...smiles...its beautiful to read...the concepts leaves you in awe of the beauty and flow of this writing....you feel happy and sad all at once...this is what true talent is about...capturing the reader and painting that image in their minds eye for all to see...you have that gift...thank you for letting me be invited to share your writings....look forward to reading more.

good write buddy... have a look on my poems too.

Wow! This is truly an amazing poem, far better than anything I have written. You have immense poetic talent! ! ! ! !

its really great feeling that more and more poem lovers are becoming attracted to my feathered friend..............appreciate your reading dear readers..............soul has made one of the finest comments............shahzia has found time to comment even though she has read the poem on the wings of silence my page at facebook.....valsa george had given a remarkable opinion comparing to albatros in ancient mariners...........and so so......................am happy........

Brilliant imagery. Fine usage of words. A very touching poem.

Amazing and the lines are fantastic, i like the story and the imagery you build by your pen! and the best thing in this poem i found = the feeling, it is a great feeling attached to me after finished your last line..very good job! you are talented in artistry painted words_Soul

Very imaginative. Can be real though. Ideal tackled in a magnificent way. You are a real artist. Your carried the idea well and gave it a nice ending. The line are very touching and the words used did justice. Rain came, dew invaded and storm plundered my hillresort! Outstanding

Beauty structured on artistic scales........... a poem, a fairy tale, a fantasy, a symbolic narrative.......... beautiful work!

grt poem.....so thick n grt......an eyeopener......kp going..

Full of Humanity and love for your feathered friend, which can be any one without wings also! ! ! ! Love it

Very nice and moving, love it!

Somewhat dark but lovely. Keep it up

A tale, so absorbing and moving told in beautiful verse reminding one of the tale of the albatros and the ancient mariner of Coleridge! Great! This desrves a 10+

A heart full of empathy even for little birds mirrors your loving heart. Well written. Kudos.Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

You have a loving heart to show this care of your feathered friend and the baby.

a true dream of love and its wings of fire narration is like a agnostic ......

Rich content. A story at the surface with deport content for the reader to interpret and ponder! Very beautifully written.

Wow bravo 4 dis bravura! I nearly always write what i see so is dis a true narrative? Admire yor freeverse empathy sympathy 4 d bird as im a birdlover. Or did u mean dis sth other than a wingd bird.