The silence is flooding my ears.
Your absence is feeding my fears.
I've never quite known
if my feelings have shown
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At last Mary 'classic' poetic form! No matter that iti as Limerick. You are up another notch in my estimation. Good on ya
Yes Mary, this is you and it's all good. You may believe it yourself one day. There are a few tiny stumbles that you could look at but perhaps perfection would detract. H
I hope a very fortunate man appreciates these lovely thoughts.
At last Mary true poetic form. No matter that it's limeric form which is frequently the form of hunorouss doggerel. This in't. You have invested it with the accolade of high order poetry. Well done