Tuesday, August 26, 2008

My Favourite Hello And Hardest Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.5

In the halls you pass me by.
Without a hello without a goodbye.
No second glance my way.
Forgotten like yesterday.
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Ernestine Northover 07 September 2008

Good rhythm and I think you have woven this one together well. I like the use of the repeat at the end. Follows through well. Good thinking. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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