Saturday, August 13, 2011

My Favourite Game-Sofia Darling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breathing through a tight chest
I stand at attention to the rough, tormented ocean.
The jagged edge of the cliff
My arms arise in slow motion.
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this poem is a good poem, its has nice meaning, put a couple pictures in my mind, it was a lil rough dont take me rwrong it is still a very nice poem, keep it up :)

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