Wednesday, June 4, 2008

My Favorite Mistake Comments

Rating: 5.0

My favorite mistake
keeps stringing me along.
It reminds me of the place
I used to belong.
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Julie Neises
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Emancipation Planz 18 June 2008

You will do fine... tis nice pieces of mistakes and you are not cocking up at all....

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Greenwolfe 1962 16 June 2008

This was done well until the last verse. I don't know what happened but it wasn't good. GW62

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Tai Chi Italy 11 June 2008

Understanding is the key to forgiveness Julie, and your poem is a great explanation of why we sometimes do and say things we would never normally even think, never mind say. I love the title too. Well done. Smiling at you, Tai

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Stone Granite 04 June 2008

The title is excellent, having a “favorite” mistake is wonderful. The mistake is accepted and I love the fact that you do not ask forgiveness for the initial mistakes, only for the ones who shall make. Outstanding. You are true to yourself, when many of us are not. Great stuff, Jules.

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