You left my arms suddenly
I didn't admit it could've been me
That made you leave
The last word you said is that you going to Venice
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Such a good poem about a romantic breakup. LeeAnn, you've so well expressed the immaturity of one partner and the maturity of personal growth in the other. Great poem! !
So well expressed. we feel your sadness and disappointment. Great poem, one of your best!
Acknowledgement of a mistake is also apologize.Open expression, nice poem, enjoyed a lot.
Excellent poem LeeAnn. Love can be so painful and can be so intricate, and you have expressed it beautifully.
Great: You told me you're sorry that you fell in love with me....Full ****
A beautiful poem depicting the many Intricacies of love. I concur with your closure lines.You didn't have to apologize. Heartfelt and well expressed.
I love how a title interacts with it's poem!