Many flowers are there
In my garden
All of them are ravishing
And different
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I just read two of your poems, and as far as I can tell, you relate most everything in a way to relationships, if you know what I mean. Also, they have a shorter, choppier form, to the point where you read it in parts, but don't think I say this as a bad thing, I actually would say that in this case, it makes your poems better.
u r an excellent poet.. hats off