My Favorite Anecdote From Urdu Comments

can i find this poem in urdu or in Hindi any of one language?

I heard it from my father n almost forgot. This is a great story thanks for reminding 😊...i will definitely tell it to my daughter

Wellp-nned, a story poem with a message...thank for sharing!

Great story.The ones handed down from one generation to another are always full of wisdom

well written 10***: D

yes it is a famous story. while during working on this poem, i think if you carry a child's emotions, because of remembering your sweet mother. good work. best wishes.

Beautiful anecdote with good message. Loved reading it.

a good anecdote.....easy flowing and simple

I love this story, I keep telling it to my friends over and over, because many people listens what others say and they never follow their own feeling. To find this truth that listen to God means the person found the right self confidence. However, first we have to find kindness and not just any following the anger and hatred and then our life will be well forever.

It has got the rhythm that makes it a fine piece of work, otherwise thanks for the effort put in as it is deserving.

Hi S.zaynub (lovely name) . First of all thanks for the feedback to my poem Translucence . Thanks also for reminding me about the Urdu anecdote, it's a charming story. Have a good day. Jay

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you for the kind words of mine! ! ! !