Sunday, May 21, 2017

My Favored Love Comments

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"I can feel
the scorching heat
as I think of you
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Rajnish Manga 21 May 2017

Though, the entire poem sets the mood for a romantic frame work, I have picked the following lines to bring home my point. Thanks. my heart's on fire / like the heat of the sun to be in your dreams / is where I want to be

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 May 2017

A very smooth flow of love. Very nicely composed and has a good flow. Thanks for sharing.

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