My Fault, I Accept Comments

i like your last lines you see, we sometimes have to accept that we are fools with love but it is okay because no one can equal the happiness we feel when we are inlove i love this poem

A beautiful piece, I've really enjoyed reading your work, there's a lot of pain and understanding in your words, keep it up!

Lovely poem, very emotional.Many with broken hearts will agree with you, and many will learn from your experience.Good work...