My father, my father,
I love he,
my father, my father,
made me see,
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This is a beautiful poem expressing the love of a teen aged daughter for her father who is ill, lying on a hospital bed. The feelings are tender and the emotion deep. Well done!
only a tender heart of devoted child can create such lovely piece. im proud to share the same date of birthday with such talented poet like u!
I too wish i had a relationship like the one you have with your father! You are blessed to be loved & to love someone so strongly.
lovelt just lovely raven! i wish i could care about my father the way you do... if you read my poem, A Living Statue, it is subtley directed toward him. keep up the great work. -Layla
He rests in peace darling.