Friday, June 28, 2019

My Father Forever Comments

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I thought you were forever
And so was I
I thought you were
The old warbled banayan tree
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Seema Jayaraman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2019

In the equally ancient temple courtyard the old warbled banyan tree is witnessing the temple prayers and motivating others to follow the right path of prayer. Shelter is in high winds and heavy rain and singing joyous song of life and love. Soft pink lotus is dazzling in temple pond. Metaphorically you have presented the filial love and this is a great emotional and affectionate poem about father and daughter. This is a great tribute poem to your father...10

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