Sunday, May 18, 2014

My Father-A Bliss To Me! Comments

Rating: 2.5

The sun falls ill and the moon recovers
When I hold my patience like the true lovers
To see a glimpse of him and speak out a word
The 'He' I refer to is my Father, my Lord!
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Naima Ansari
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Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Fantastic lines....... My love will not last forever because it is true All it depends upon is to have a father as loving as you. Though you feel you are left lonely especially when your father is busy and unable to notice of you even. I loved reading each lines. Beautiful presentation. Loved it. and keep writing...

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