Friday, June 19, 2015

My Father... Comments

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I was on your palms, very small and quiet,
While you were too tall for me to ascent,
You were a cute playground with leggy slides,
The bushy chest where I crawled as the new moth,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 June 2015

Very nicely envisioned about a father, his sacrifice, good will and true love. Excellent phraseology. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for posting. ....... 10

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