Saturday, January 14, 2012

My Father Comments

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Once I did not know him
A little girl wanted nothing more but to be beside him
He kept saying 'he would be there' but did not show
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Jamillex Barreto 22 March 2012

GREAT! I could compare to you! My father left me when i was just a baby. Now he got cancer. My father and I always argued. He called me a lair. So i stood up for my self and told him You left me when i was a baby so you don't got no right to call me a lair. Now we are starting to get along. D:

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Nazma Lucky 12 February 2012

Nice, feelings from life, , , , , , , , , , being far always patheic

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Hans Vr 14 January 2012

Wonderful poem, Crystal, full of feeling. Very speical situation, well written

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CRYSTAL B. SMITH

CRYSTAL B. SMITH

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