Saturday, May 23, 2009

My Father Comments

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my father was a merchant seaman since the age of twelve
left spain because he was living in hell.
living in valencia, by the shore, thinking of
lands he never saw before.
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louis rams
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

so this is to our father his spirit we hold dear. because we know he is always near..so much respectful views for father and indeed that should be the case with all.... lovely write....10 read mine papa do u know? ? ? ? papa you too.... do u know? ? ?

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a wonderful narration of a true dad.....good tribute

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Christine Kerr 24 May 2009

Nicely Done Louis, There's no better way to remember a bit of history, then to put it in a poem for all time keep sakes, Papa would be proud. 10++

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Sandra Fowler 23 May 2009

You have a storybook father. A wonderful, colorful read full of romance and adventure.10 without hesitation. Warmest regards, Sandra

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