Monday, May 18, 2009

My Father Comments

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I hugged my father for the first time in 18 years.
All I wanted to do was shed tears.
My emotions for my father run wild,
Wished he was there when I was a child.
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Sylvia Dise
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Scott Austin 12 June 2009

This is a very touching piece of work you have written here. Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts with. People can change over time. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day. Scott

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so much deep love for fathe. i wrote keeping daughter's view inmind1) papa do youknow& papa you too along with O. mother.I shall appriciate if u read it and not comment. it is nofor for commentbut i read ur poem andfelt like telling u.......rating10.

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Audrey Heller 18 May 2009

Sad, but blood is thicker, than water! And what you have written, no matter what, you still, are, his daughter!

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Sylvia Dise

Sylvia Dise

Laurel, Delaware
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