My Father Comments

Hi Linta, Your poem, expressing such deep emotions from the depth of the heart, touches the heart of the reader. It captures the feeling of the irreparable loss so accurately. The poet's heart speaks to the readers'. One can see tears welling in your eyes and no one can read it without missing a heart-beat. I have hardly ever read line like this line of yours: He was a leaf, that ran away from its tree. What an excellent metaphor..100++

Feel your deep pain down Your intimate write touch a core profound Your words take you memory lane Right from your much tearful heart Wish, I give a friendly hug To lessen void your father Absence h's left behind Your loss, I'm sorry for Going strong keep your writes A fellow admiring poet so desires Viva your poetry!

lovin it! ! .

I really like this poem, it was well-written

i love this poem its so good

Lovely memoriam for a dad, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Linta.

Very nice poem. thanks for sharing

Beautiful phrases to demonstrate the emotional connect that a father shares with his child touching poem...