Sunday, November 13, 2016

My Father Comments

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My father left me,
when I was twenty.
He was a leaf,
that ran away from its tree.
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Linta Babar MNSR
COMMENTS
Unnikrishnan E S 19 December 2016

Hi Linta, Your poem, expressing such deep emotions from the depth of the heart, touches the heart of the reader. It captures the feeling of the irreparable loss so accurately. The poet's heart speaks to the readers'. One can see tears welling in your eyes and no one can read it without missing a heart-beat. I have hardly ever read line like this line of yours: He was a leaf, that ran away from its tree. What an excellent metaphor..100++

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Leon Villegas 20 November 2016

Feel your deep pain down Your intimate write touch a core profound Your words take you memory lane Right from your much tearful heart Wish, I give a friendly hug To lessen void your father Absence h's left behind Your loss, I'm sorry for Going strong keep your writes A fellow admiring poet so desires Viva your poetry!

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Chloe Haddon Mnsr 20 November 2016

lovin it! ! .

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Linta Babar Mnsr 21 November 2016

Thank you

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Mnsralyssa N 17 November 2016

I really like this poem, it was well-written

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Linta Babar Mnsr 20 November 2016

Awww. Thank you Alyssa, but to be honest your poems are also AMAZING.

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Leen Akel Mnsr 17 November 2016

i love this poem its so good

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Linta Babar Mnsr 20 November 2016

Thank you\

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Linta Babar Mnsr 20 November 2016

your poems are so gooood

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Chinedu Dike 14 November 2016

Lovely memoriam for a dad, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Linta.

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Menato San 14 November 2016

Very nice poem. thanks for sharing

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Abhishek Singh 13 November 2016

Beautiful phrases to demonstrate the emotional connect that a father shares with his child touching poem...

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