Sunday, December 6, 2015

My Father Comments

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My father drank a lot.
He lost his job,
his country, his belief and hope.
Though many years passed,
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Almas Assylbekov
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Dr Antony Theodore 19 January 2016

It seems he's carrying his devotion to the grave; no matter that it has no sense. My father used to be a Soviet... Slave. Father, his memories. his sufferings, his pains, his thoughts. his hatred. all that is there in this poem well articulated. He carries his devotion to the grave.... thank you for this poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 03 January 2016

A well articulated narrative piece of poetry, nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Almas.

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