My Father - 1 Comments

That you planted around you and us.... I have no words nor guts To describe the incarnation That was you. Good poem with so nice reverence..Thanks for sharing it.. 10++++ Rani

That you planted around you and us.... I have no words nor guts To describe the incarnation That was you. Good poem with so nice reverence..Thanks for sharing it..

two suggestions if you accept COMBINE ALL 5 OF FATHERS POEMS AS ONE. FIRST LETTERS not to be Caps Second why those unnecessary exclamation marks i wonder Hope i have done my sincere duty as directed God bless thee poet. I always say help any poet improve we all are not perfect else we will not be able to compose more We still strive on Thanks Read some more of mine any first 50 I want to publish with good comments no BUTTER ONLY PLEASE i LOVE frankness thanx

You shall be wedded To the familiar world Of my departed mother! To the set frames again Of my old fashioned mother! Beautiful ode to papa. Thanks for sharing it.

To the nascent tides Of a timeless vast ocean! To the void lanes Of memories and unspelt verses Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing the poem.

To set the frames once again! Nice piece of work.

I have no words to describe The lyrics of your unsung songs, The cantos of your unspelt tongue, The melodies and harmony in lives - That you planted around you and us.... I have no words nor guts To describe the incarnation That was you. Good poem with so nice reverence..Thanks for sharing it..10 marks