My Fate Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Seyi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

A good poem is not just the product of poet but also the entire community. Your poem has brought us to the past

As if encharmed, I rose immediately, Walked as a man and discovered my talent… I cried not for merriment but for sadness...in the middle of the poem you wrote that you are saved from sadness. but later at the end you said the opposite.......... did not understand it much...... still this is a good poem.. God bless you. tony