My Fate Poem by Romeo Della Valle

My Fate

Rating: 5.0


I have flown to the limitless skies
While bewitched by your bittersweet lies...
On you I placed my heart's desire and hope
But, instead, you betrayed my trust...

I offered you pure love but you played a game,
Making me look like a picture without a frame...
You designed that game and played it well,
Turning my life into a living Hell...

I learned the hard and painful way
To travel through my destiny's highway
Finding myself trapped in the shadow
And living in a world so narrow...

Now, laughing at what I thought I had lost,
I realize that you were not worth the cost...
Today, I try to bury my turbulent past
By reserving the best of me for last...

Hoping to find a fruit with a better taste,
In God's hands I leave my fate...
Gone are the worries and pain,
I am master of my own domain...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 14 June 2012

''I offered you pure love but you played a game, Making me look like a picture without a frame... You designed that game and played it well, Turning my life into a living Hell...'' thought provoking stanza of a beautiful poem, i love this.

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Elna Nel 14 June 2012

Powerful! Can relate to your words.

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(De Va) 13 June 2012

absolutely stunning.....I could feel such sad passion...thanks for your invitation to read, blessings..Deva

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Marieta Maglas 13 June 2012

Your poem is impeccable written.I think that there a few poets in this world being capable to express the sorrow so well as you expressed it in this love poem.I like also the rhymes.Mari.

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Heather Wilson 13 June 2012

Such a beautiful poem, I found inspiration from, thank you.

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Meena Mustafa 26 July 2012

Wow! Wow! Wow! I am speechless.... A BEAUTIFUL write.

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 23 June 2012

Heartbreak! Heartbreak! ! This is a lovely emotion purged out in a beautiful couplets.

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Hans Vr 19 June 2012

Very good poem. I love the very positive ending. So much wisdom in this poem. So refreshing Very thoughtfully written. Excellent

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Valerie Dohren 17 June 2012

Great poem - we all strive to be masters of our own domain.

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Karen Sinclair 17 June 2012

Master of your domain... great tie up line to recognition that you are able to take your future and enjoy it and maybe hushing past pains under the rug...good luck in life and love... karen

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