Friday, July 31, 2009

``**my Fantasy World``** Comments

Rating: 4.6

as i was walking the birds were singing above me
the weather is so nice and the blue sky is all i can see

looking at the flowers dancing with the wind breeze
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dana XxX
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~ Jon London ~ 02 August 2009

Love is in the air, everywhere I look around..every site every sound.....beautifully written piece DaNA.....keep up the great work....you have a natural gift 10

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 01 August 2009

love is the elixir of life.... it is such nice feeling that is beyond explanation...

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hey......................................... Dana.. you be in it. love that is

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Jazz Annis 01 August 2009

i know what it's like...to want to be with someone and have them make u feel like ur living ur dream every day...i know that feeling...but for me...my dream faded away because i let him go...my mom hated him...and i was too scared to stand up to her...she would of sent me away...to live with my real mother...now i'm with someone that makes me happy...but never makes me feel like i'm living my dream everyday...that's what i got out of ur beautiful poem...if u love him...hold on tight to him...never let him go...cuz i learned that...if u do...u may never get them back...and i don't think i'll b able to live in my fantasy world with my eyes open...so thank u...for sharing this poem...it was a very good one... :)

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