Saturday, April 26, 2008

My Fantasy Comments

Rating: 4.0

You look at me with dark brown eyes
Eyes that say, 'I've known you all my life.'
I look at you and your deep, sunken eyes look almost like mine
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Mitzie Holstein
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Will P. Litter 26 April 2008

Your poem sounds like very tender longing, yet just with sparks (in a way) . Nice!

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