Tuesday, June 22, 2010

My Fantasy Comments

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Every night you come in my dream
Flowing through my mind and body like a rampant stream
I thirstily wait for your presence
Like the droughty land waits,
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SREEJITH KULAPARAMBIL
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Pranab K Chakraborty 06 July 2010

Please make a stop to your regular dream of seducing. Health will otherwise breakdown by the loss of vital fluid. Any way writing is very much warm. Keep on the track. Imagery is very living and contaminating also. Write more....more....

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Rahul Aithal 25 June 2010

Good flow. keep writing.

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Dr. Sonal Chhaya 24 June 2010

wild imagery..well penned..

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Indira Babbellapati 22 June 2010

from the physical to the spiritual...

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loNeLY AnGel 22 June 2010

beautiful poem my friend very well written i must add........... enjoy it :)

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