My Fantasy Comments

lovely i like it, , keep up the good writings

the element of fantasy is so well depicted through emotive and resonant images... that softens every heart.

The 'fantasy' that the poet professes indicates that his notion of love, the overpowering feelings and emotions which have inspired his expression are intricately linked with the images of beauty that he finds in nature. The comparisons with elements of nature conjure a sense of the 'classical romanticism', yet the flow of the inner voice indicates that 'she' the love he yearns for alone is not enough. The love the poet wishes to express to his love and experince himself is placed in the context of a wide variety of experiences that he fantasises of. Goes to assert that love does not take place in a vacumm. It is the world which he dreams of that has enhanced her beauty and her beauty inturn does make the world he dreams of a fantastical place of incomparable beauty.

Its such a sweet and highly expressive poem! Spoken wonderfully from the heart! Excellent job!

Sweet! She's a lucky girl Trenton, your heart is in a wonderful creative place to write from.... nice poem buddy. As for her father... maybe one day he will see a little more than your shadow.