Right across my dream they come
I know not from which land
Bright ‘n buoyant glow in flame
They take me to a dance!
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amazing poem...the suspense fans...the sky and stars are well kept till the last....written with your superb craftsmanship....10
Lucky me that I read this on a lazy Sunday evening... and feeling proud to think that I am one among those who comes to your dream for all your expressive writes.
No matter how many times I read it it is still a delight a 10x10x10...
A lovel poem, we are all blessed by the evening's cloak! regards Bob
simply 'superb'...different frm most of your poems...keep writing... :)
'I' there in the poem stands for poets in general who write on nature. You miss the message, Ivor!
Admiration is a boost to the ego but you must not begin to believe it makes you special
Very artful and charming. Ten for you and ten for your fans. As always, Sandra
May be stars n sky too your fans, incredible, it is the vision a poet can bring out, brilliant work, wonderful conept, perfect 10
a very nice poem and expresses the brightness and the joy awaiting with so much care and respect. well done.
i must say this time u captured my thoughts...i ws thinking about something almost the same way... thanks fr bringing it to my notice.... :) a wonderful thought.. brought down equally good..
You nave personalized the elements and dressed them in bright costumes in this delightful poem about life and the brightness of the universe. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Yet again, the deft stroke, painting a telling a picture and leaving the reader to garner thoughts from it! A fine one!
Venkat, Your modest respect looks nobly, very good work and sincere... And to me has liked...10... Tsira
A beautiful imaginative write. The wonders of nature can make a Poet's mind very creative. A poetic gem crafted.by a brilliant mind.