Sunday, August 28, 2011

My Family Comments

Rating: 2.8

My family is like my shadow,
who follows me where I go.
Who reduces my pain
Advices me again and again.
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Zeenat Fatima
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Zeenat Fatima 18 September 2012

thanx for reading and commenting, guys... Ya I too hav got dis beautiful treasure. and their love inspired me to write this poem.. :)

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Hazel Durham 16 September 2012

A lovely tribute to your family, great write! I really enjoyed it.

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Hans Vr 05 October 2011

Wonderfully said! If just more people would realise how big a treasure family is, the world would look so different now. Very good poem!

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 August 2011

very nice.blessed are those who have beautiful family life.keep inking.

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