Thursday, April 23, 2015

My Faith Will Move On Comments

Rating: 4.8

My cupboard’s a mess,
my sink filled with lye

My stables now empty,
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Rob Lamberton 09 January 2025

"All these troubles will pass, - - and my faith will move on"

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Wale Adekoya 07 January 2024

A beautiful poem. Reminds me of a similarly themed bible verse (Hab 3: 17-18)

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Kristina Rose32 24 February 2022

Love this poem

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Evelyn Morianos 03 February 2022

Love this. Very encouraging to me.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2020

My pastures are fallow, my timber all burned My streams have been fished out, and what have I learned This is the language of faith. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 September 2020

My stables now empty, my well has gone dry My streams have been fished out A new well can be dug. simmering hopes. tony

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2019

It takes a positive faith to get positive results; and faith keeps those who keep the faith. A sublime depiction of true faith in God. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed.

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Takbeer Salati 18 February 2018

Can I say cupboard is life?

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Kurt Philip Behm 18 February 2018

Very Nice!

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Akhtar Jawad 02 September 2017

For a dark and troubled night there is a day of sunny rest, great poem.

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Gurleen Kaur Narang 11 August 2017

Wonderful rhyme written in the best of ways!

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Garry Rowlands 06 April 2017

Very good. Love the rythms

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Doctor Crazy 28 March 2017

Love the sense of hope, awesome bro: -)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2017

All these troubles will pass, - - and my faith will move on..... faith is omnipresent and we have to move with it. It is a beautiful philosophical poem having nice penmanship...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2017

All these troubles will pass, - - and my faith will move on..... faith is omnipresent

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Seamus O Brian 22 November 2016

Poignant and reflective. Finely crafted work. A pleasure to read and contemplate. Thank you!

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Walterrean Salley 15 November 2016

...Facing many trials in this life, and I'm always looking for encouraging pieces to strengthen and prod me on. A beautiful portrait. Thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2016

Hope and dreams! ! Facing life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Amar Agarwala 05 November 2016

What a lovely composition... Kurt! Meaningful and the rhyming is great. You deserve a +10, for this one!

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Ging Taping 29 September 2016

faith can move mountain..without faith we can't continue with our journey..Thanks for sharing

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Darren Jkoeryo 30 July 2016

Great going man...Like your attitude.10

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